Tuesday 1 December 2015

2nd Draft of TV script

INT. COSTA COFFEE – AFTERNOON. BLACKBURN, ENGLAND.
Grace: A 17 year old college student who is a victim of bullying. She has long, wavy hazelnut brown hair and pale skin. She is of an average build and wears thick rimmed black glasses. She is sat across from her best friend James who is also 17 and attends the same college.

GRACE:
She’s awesome.

(She places her phone on the table and reluctantly smiles at James.)

JAMES:
You talking to her again?
(A frustrated expression stretches along his face)
You have absolutely no idea who she is, that’s if she even is a she.

GRACE:
Why do you get so angry about this? She’s the only person who understands me. Listens to me.

JAMES:
(He sighs, sarcastically.)
So I don’t listen to you do I? Its dangerous speaking to someone online, anything could happen. Even you must see that.


(Grace stands up, swinging her rucksack over her shoulders and snatches her phone off the table.)

GRACE:
I’m sick of you getting involved!
(She lowers her voice)
You don’t know me like she does, you don’t know what it’s like for me to come here – everyday. It’s a living hell and I’m sick of it.

(James glances at the floor, taking into consideration how bad the bullying is)

CONT’D GRACE
Its alright for you. You’ve never had to put up with the things I have.






JAMES:
I know you’re having a hard time. (He pauses)
...But i don’t like the sound of this person. MissAnonymous13? That sounds freaky enough already? You could be speaking to anyone. Could be Leonie for all we know.

(Grace moves towards the table and slowly sits down beside James. She stares at him for a couple of seconds, gathering her thoughts.)

GRACE:
You’re jealous, aren’t you? C’mon admit it.

JAMES:
Jealous?! (He becomes quickly frustrated and defensive and his tone loudness.)
Jealous of you speaking to some creep online? (He mocks her)
If I’m really being honest its not like you’ve got many friends to choose from anyway, you said it yourself! I’m doing you a favour!

GRACE:
Excuse me?

(She stands up quickly, feeling hurt and attacked.)

JAMES:
Being friends with you is a nightmare. All you ever do is lock yourself away its no wonder you’re so disliked. I’m forced to listen to all your pathetic problems and you never listen to mine. I’m sick of defending you all the...

(Grace interrupts but James continues)

CONT’D JAMES
You may as well leave now. Run back to your stupid Youtube Videos and your weirdo friend!

GRACE:
I can’t believe you.

(Grace storms off; a pained expression stretches across her face as her cheeks become blushed and hot. She exits the coffee shop and heads towards the bus stop leaving James sat alone. She reaches home and rushes to her room. She logs onto a laptop and receives a message from MissAnonymous13.)




INT. GRACES BEDROOM. BLACKBURN, ENGLAND.

(Grace and MissAnonymous chat online. Grace is using the username PrettyYoung97)

MISSANONYMOUS13:
Hey girl. What’s up?

PRETTYYOUNG97:
Hey. God am I glad to be speaking to you. Had the day from hell and my so called ‘best friend’ has been absolutely vile to me! He said that he was doing ME a favour for being friends with me! Not like he’s Mr Popular.

MISSANONYMOUS13:
Who? That looser James? I’ve told you he isn’t the friend you think he is. You should just block him so he can’t try and argue with you tonight.

PRETTYYOUNG97:
(Grace is oblivious to MissAnonymous13’s scheming and agrees.)
Yeah! He’s jealous because I’ve found someone who I can relate to other than him! He was sooo cruel to me and some of the stuff he said – well, I’ve never seen him like that.

MISSANONMOUS13:
Urgh. He makes me sick. How can he make you feel like that? He enjoys making you feel like you can’t have other friends, he wants to control you and that’s not right. I’ll never do that to you. Anyway, enough of him! How are you really?

PRETTYYOUNG97:
Not too good at the moment. Leonie is still making my life hell and I don’t know how long I can cope with it. My family doesn’t wanna know, my teachers don’t wanna know and now James doesn’t wanna know.

MISSANONYMOUS13:
Well I want to know you. Hey, I’ve just had the best idea hahaha.

(Grace relaxes in her chair, her eyes soaked into the comfort of the computer screen. She feels happy and comfortable.)

CONT’D MISSANONYMOUS13
Did you ever see that film where that girl was bullied and she just takes matters into her own hands? That’s what you’ve got to do. You have to take control and stop people from walking over you. You like YouTube right?

PRETTYYOUNG97:
Yeah, guess so.

MISSANONYMOUS13:
Well, do you remember last week? We spoke for hours about our dreams -  you said yours was to be a number one internet sensation, yeah? PRANK VS. PRANK. Have you any idea how many subscribers they have? You could do it! You could become famous then you’d be the one laughing at Leonie.

PRETTYYOUNG97:
I could do pranks? No way. I wouldn’t know where to start and I’m not funny, not to mention creative. What would I do anyway? Put some gum on her seat? Lame.

MISSANONYMOUS13:
No looser. That’s armature. I mean something insane. Something wicked. Be smart. Do something they won’t expect. Something no one will expect.

PRETTYOUNG97:
OK, well go on.

MISSANONYMOUS13:
How about if you was to find out where they lived? Not hard.

PRETTYYOUNG97:
And if I did, then what?

MISSANONYMOUS13:
You need to go when its dark. Really dark. Take photographs of her house and when she’s walking home. Tell her you’re coming for her.

PRETTYYOUNG97:
Are you crazy?! She’d kill me. She’d come into college the next day and everything would be made worse. I can’t do that to her: she frightens me.

MISSANONYMOUS13:
No, silly. How is she supposed to know it’s you? You create a fake profile and message her on that. Look at you now, you’re talking to me and either of us can be whoever we want. When we talk we have a blank slate: you don’t know who I am and I don’t know who you are. That’s the beauty of it.


(Grace smiles and agrees with MissAnonymous13 but also considers the dangers and risks of messing with Leonie.)

PRETTYYOUNG97:
Hmm, I’m not sure. You have a good point. I guess, well... I guess I’m just a little scared.

MISSANONYMOUS13:
C’mon, its a great idea. You have too. If you don’t take control now it will be too late and get worse, you don’t want that do you? You don’t want them to hurt other people the same way they hurt you, do you? What about your little sister? For all we know she could be next. You have to do something girl.



EXT. MORNING - ST PAULS COLLEGE. BLACKBURN, ENGLAND.

It is early morning and the clouds that loom above are grey and eerie. Grace heads towards the college doors to receive a smirk off Leonie who is stood with a group of friends discussing their weekend plans.

LEONIE:
What you lookin’ at?

(Laughter erupts from the surrounding girls and Grace looks at the ground and attempts to scurry away.)


FRIEND 1:
Hey, she’s talkin’ to you. Where do you think you’re going?

(Friend 1 grabs Grace by the arm and pushes her so that she is trapped between the wall and the group of bullies.)

GRACE:
Ouch! Please get off, I wasn’t lookin’ at nothin’. Let me go im gonna be late.

(Grace shrugs herself free from the grip of Leonie and attempts to move past. Her heart is pounding and her eyes begin to fill with tears.)
FRIEND 2:
Oh shut up you silly girl! Were only messin’ with ya’. What you crying for?

JAMES:
Hey! What you doing? Get off her now.
(James approaches the group of girls and allows Grace to scurry off. Grace gives him a look of appreciation.)

GRACE:
(Mouthing) Thankyou.
(James turns away and a look of disgust is painted across his face. He exits.)


INT. GRACES HOUSE - KITCHEN – LATE AFTERNOON. BLACKBURN, ENGLAND.
Grace’s mother, Janet, and father, Kevin, are stood in the kitchen while Janet is preparing dinner. Kevin approaches Janet and puts his arm around her shoulder.

KEVIN:
I’m worried about Grace y’know. This is the third time her tutor has rang me in the past month. She keeps turning up late and when she is there she can’t focus…

JANET:
  I know darling, but there all the same. Girls that age are feelin’ all over the place. She just needs some time to herself.

KEVIN:
That’s just it though – she is never out of her room. She comes home from college and goes straight up there, sometimes she doesn’t even say Hi.

(Janet faces Kevin and directs him a comforting smile to reassure him.)

JANET:
It’s not as bad as that.

KEVIN:
(He sighs)
Her grades have dropped so much since she started college, you can’t tell me there’s nothing wrong with that. Maybe she’s got a boyfriend or somethin’.
(Grace opens the front door and enters the house but her parents are oblivious to her entry. She can hear them discussing about her and decides to edge towards the door and listen.)

CONT’D KEVIN:
Look im sick of it. We have two other children and she just seems to be the odd one out. She’s needlessly moody, failing at college and she seems to enjoy making our life difficult by hiding away and playin’ on that stupid laptop. I’m gonna take it off her until her grades improve.
JANET:
Don’t you think you’re being a little hasty…Confiscating her laptop isn’t gonna solve anyt-…

(He interrupts)

KEVIN:
No, she’s a failure and I can’t just stand back and do nothing. What about Matthew? He’s so intelligent, I can’t believe that they are related.


(Grace storms into the kitchen, feeling furious and betrayed her cheeks are blemished. Kevin and Janet turn around surprised and speculate whether Grace has heard their conversation.)

JANET:
Hey, darling. I didn’t hear you…

GRACE:
Is that what you really think? Wow thanks dad. If that’s how you feel then I’m leaving right now, I…

KEVIN:
Don’t be stupid, I didn’t mean…I was just saying that erm…

GRACE:
I know exactly what you was saying, I just can’t believe…

(Her eyes begin fill with tears as she turns away and hurries upstairs. She reaches her bedroom and pulls a drawer of clothes out and takes a handful then throws them onto her bed. She sobs and glances at her phone screen. She takes out her laptop from under her bed and messages MissAnonymous13.)

GRACES BEDROOM – LATE AFTERNOON. BLACKBURN, ENGLAND.

(Typing)

PRETTYYOUNG97:
Hey! You won’t believe what just happened. I came home to hear my parents slagging me off, calling me a failure! My dad said he’s going to take my laptop off me until my grades improve but if he does that I’ll leave this house and never come back!


MISSANONYMOUS13:
God that’s awful. Your own parents? Anyway, did you set up that fake account like I told you? I’m so excited, this is gonna’ be such a great plan.

(Grace sulks into her chair feeling ignored.)

PRETTYYOUNG97:
Well, no. Not exactly. Leonie shoved me up against a wall today, she said I was starin’ at her when I wasn’t. But, you know what? James came over, he told them to get off me! He’s never done that before, stuck up for me like that! I really hope me and him sort things out soon.

MISSANONYMOUS13:
You can’t keep putting it off, OK? Do it tonight, do it now? Set up the account. I’ve already told you, James is a pathetic loser, he’s jealous and controlling and you can’t see that because of how blind you are! Get a grip girl and get rid while you still can.

(Grace feels hurt that her online friend is being spiteful towards her friend James. She feels uncomfortable defending him as she knows that MissAnonymous13 is her only friend and someone that she cannot afford to lose.)

PRETTYYOUNG97:
Ok, I’ll do it now. Speak to you later.

(Grace closes the chat and creates a new account. She uses the username ‘RightBehindYou_.’ Feeling agitated, hurt and wanting revenge she searches Leonie and messages her.)

(Typing)

RIGHTBEHINDYOU_:
I know who you are and I know what you did.

(Seconds after sending the message Grace slams her laptop shut to hear her mother edging up the stairs and knocking on her door before opening it at a small angle. Grace, aware that her mother is there, ignores her appearance and stares at the end of her bed.)

JANET:

How you feeling darling? About before, Dad didn’t mean what he said. He just cares a lot and he doesn’t want you falling behind…That’s all.

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